Ok, so I posted this poem on my other blog, and I got some very useful feedback. So, I decided to change it. But first I will post the very first version, then the re-finished one after.
The Flower (take 1)
How can flowers bloom
Day after day?
With everything around
their beautiful petals
as boring and ordinary
as dried out clay
But why do us as humans
have the right to judge
day to day things
With only one grudge?
What do you really see when you glance at that flower?
Red?
Green?
Something Unseen?
You see, its not the appearance
One should conceive
For there isnt one way a person could be
For there isnt one way a flower should be.
This is how it goes
This is how life flows.
Beauty around us
Beauty slipping past us.
Only being mistaken as ugly.
But as that flower is being judged
As it is being ignored.
Havent you noticed
It doesnt change its way
Because of what one person may say?
The wind gives it confidense
As it finds its way
Growing for something much much more
Than you and I.
The grass gives the flower
Its last goodbyes
Waving with sadness
Happiness and Surprise.
Take another look at that one single flower, you ignored last year.
What have you noticed, not seen before?
Confidence bursts,
And you only hurt.
Because you were the one judging
As the flower was distending
You should be that flower
No matter the things people may say.
Because one day when you're about to give up
That person may find you
And have nothing to say.
So listen to your heart
See the little things life provides
Feel the wind, invisible to your eyes
And be that flower
Climbing towards the sky.
The Flower (take 2)
How can flowers bloom
Day after day?
With everything around
Always the same.
But why do us as humans
have the right to judge
day to day things
With only one grudge?
What do you really see when you glance at that flower?
Red?
Green?
Something Unseen?
You see, its not the appearance
One should conceive
For there isnt one way a person could be
For there isnt one way a flower should be.
This is the message that is always given off
Beauty comes first
Ugly is a loss
Beauty around us
Beauty slipping past us.
Only being mistaken as ugly.
But as that flower is being judged
As it is being ignored.
Havent you noticed
It doesnt change its way
Because of what one person may say?
The wind gives it confidense
As it finds its way
Growing for something much much more
Than you and I.
The grass gives the flower
Its last goodbyes
Waving with sadness
Happiness and Surprise.
Before you know it.
Its been a year.
And that flower is still very near.
So what have you noticed, not seen before?
Confidence bursts,
And you only hurt.
Because you were the one judging
As the flower was distending
Humans are just like flowers
Living and dying
But the difference is, flowers never stop trying.
No matter the things people may say.
YOu should never give up
Or feel let down
Because that person may find you
And have nothing to say.
So listen to your heart
See the little things life provides
Feel the invisible winds traveling past your eyes
Here its confidence to your ears.
And be that flower
Climbing towards the sky.
Which one do you like better?